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Who takes the gold!?

Sammy Xu snags the gold medal AGAIN for his outstanding essay on Stephen Crane!

 

Sammy said that this essay was a nine out of ten as far as the difficulty level. His classmates will probably concur as the drafting process for this type of critical analysis essay has been quite involved. Students were required to both serve as interrogators of their subject matter by working with a sub-thesis, and were challenged to substantiate their arguments, early on (or throughout) with scholarly articles. It is not so easy to enter into discourse (peopled with academics and graduate students) about a major writer, and this is why their drafts received so much scrutiny, and why they tirelessly had to re-draft.

 

Sammy is a two-time gold winner! His previous first-place essay can be read here. Congratulations young man! Stay tuned for other Stephen Crane essays from Jason Li and Christine Deng, William Gao and Andrew Lim.



HELEN (HANYU) LIU

The Boast

by Rita Dove

At the dinner table, before the

baked eggplant, you tell the story

of your friend,

Ira, how he kept a three-foot

piranha in his basement.

“It was this long,” you say,

extending your arms,

“And it was striped, with silver

scales and blue shadows.”

The man with purple eyes lifts

his eyebrows; you laugh at his

joke about the lady in the

sausage suit, your toes find his

under the table, and he is yours.

Evening expires in a yawn of stars.

But on the walk home, when he

pulls you into the hedges, and the

black tongues of leaves flutter,

and those boogey-man eyes glitter,

There won’t be time for coming

back with lies, with lies.

The Complaint

by Helen (Hanyu) Liu

At the classroom desks, before the

teacher comes, you exaggerate

your bland day,

tired, and how you took three tests

with no sleep and no caffeine.

“It was horrible,” you say,

rolling your blunt eyes

“And the classrooms, I swear are

slowing down the time.”

The boy with the brown eyes pats

your shoulder; you smile at his

tale of how early he slept in

the morning, your eyes meet his

when you glance at him, and gleam fills you

Then day ends with faster ticking of clocks.

But after bell rings, when he

Walks you to your locker, and the

Delicate talks ease you,

And scrubs you with new energy,

There won’t be need for caffeine

And sleeping, sleeping.



2013



Silver medal

And the silver goes to… 

 

Helen Liu and Sarah Xu!

 

Both young ladies worked through at least eight drafts, and the results are exciting, informative essays about two very important battles in human history. Read the essays and write comments!