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ISAAC ZHANG

Finally, can you write about the ending? How does the lineman’s poetry correspond with the poetic murmurings of the kids at the school, and how do these remind us of Margalo’s tender and lyrical style? What characterizes the ending? Meaning, what is the final essence of character that Stuart leaves us with as he presses the tiny little gas pedal down towards the creaking floorboards of his delicate and wee gas-powered micro machine? (250 words).

I think the ending of Stuart Little teaches us to appreciate the little things in life. The lineman’s poetry shows us that happiness comes from simplicity. The children’s small comments reflect to us that happiness and meaning comes from small and ordinary moments. “How many of you know what’s important?… ‘A shaft of sunlight at the end of a dark afternoon, a note in music, and the way the back of a baby’s neck smells if its mother keeps it tidy’”. The poetry of the children ties perfectly to Margalo’s tender and lyrical style which emphasizes small, meaningful actions and reminds us how, after just a few days, Stuart goes through those tiny moments (such as the tiny moment when he removed himself from bed and went and shot an arrow against Snowball, or the tiny moment when he confesses that his ice skates are threatening their lives) that move him so much that he decides to leave everything behind to pursue her. The final essence that Stuart leaves with us is to cherish every moment, no matter how insignificant they are. He shows us that even after abandoning everything he loves in search of something so unlikely, he doesn’t dwell on the past but finds happiness in the journey. Instead of chasing grand victories, he silently values each and every second. When he presses the gas pedal, he shows us all that even without guaranteed results, without a clear plan, without an idea of where he’s going, he isn’t afraid of the future, or regretting the past, because he knows the journey is half the prize. In the end, I think the name, Stuart Little, is actually pointing to Stuart’s way of life, rather than his size.

Isaac, I loved reading your essay of Stuart Little where you share your opinion about a lot of the things he says. I agree with both the sentiments Stuart proclaims as well as the things that you highlight about them. 

 To be honest, I really liked when you highlighted Stuart’s comments that some of the happiest things are the simple ones; these things could be, “A shaft of sunlight at the end of a dark afternoon, a note in music, and the way the back of a baby’s neck smells if its mother keeps it tidy”. I also like how these small and tiny things affect Stuart as it shows us that everything with a cause will have an effect; you just may not know who it is on. This reveals Stuart’s sensitivity and his ability to connect to universal themes with his students (they know him not). I also like how Stuart goes after Margalo even though it seems to be impossible as she fled and could be anywhere in the world and he could even drive past her and not notice. I especially liked when you said “…the journey is half the prize” as I believe that in a good success the journey is half the prize if not more, as that is where your hard work, dedication, and more things lie. Stuart knows that his chances of finding Margalo are near impossible and he knows that going after her he will lose it all, but he still chooses to risk it for a chance to find her which I find both stupid but also heroic. Overall, I think your final essay answer was very well-written with a lot of quotes that I believe really fit your topic and also your themes of the small things in life were quite meaningful and relatable which made me really enjoy both reading it. I also enjoyed writing this Student Feedback, and I hope you enjoy reading it.~Chris Tian



HARRISON WANG

In chapter 3 of More Adventure of the Great Brain J.D., his brother, T.D. (the Great Brain) and S.D., and their father, Papa, decide to go on their annual camping trip. When they get to their spot where they always camped and fished, it is crowded because Papa told everyone it was the best place to fish. But then Papa makes a horrible decision to go to an unexplored part of the mountain. While they hike to the unknown part of the mountain, Papa decides to make a shortcut that can endanger all of them because anything could happen: a bear attack, they could get lost, or they could get injured. As they hike along, following the camp wagon and horses, no one notices (but J.D.) that Tom was carving his initials into the trees, so he can prove they were the first ones there. Like T.D states: “Someday they might build a road up this canyon, and I can prove we were the first ones who ever went up here.” This is a very smart idea by the Great Brain because that move could save their lives. To carry all their stuff they brought a few horses but while going uphill it became too steep and the horses are dragged down. While one of the horses, Bess, was okay, the other horse, Dick, broke his leg so they had to shoot him to end the pain. I think their father started getting really nervous and thought it was all his fault when they try making camp after the mess. I think instead of him helping build the camp and think about surviving he sits on a log and almost cries because he thought they were doomed. He believes even if he survived, his wife, J.D’s mom, will kill him for getting the kids lost: “Your mother will never forgive me for trying to take a shortcut and endangering all our lives”. He calms down after hearing that T.D. marked the trails so someone could find the path they took and then find him. “The look of despair on Papa’s face gave way to one of hope.”

After two days, Uncle Mark shows up, but Papa seems to be mad at him. “What in the name of Jupiter took you so long?” After a while though, they both calm down.

Papa’s decision endangered his children and took shortcuts that were also dangerous and led them to being lost, but T.D was smart because even though he marked the trees, (and though he doesn’t say it – was his only motivation for marking the trail to earn his fame for blazing it? Or did he do it out of a sensible maturity and care?) it saved them. If T.D. wasn’t with them they could’ve been lost and maybe have all perished. Because of the Brain, J.D. and his family were saved from being lost in unmarked territory.



NATHAN LUU

John Hodgman’s essay on Massachusetts was quite the pleasure to read.

He writes about his home state, obviously showing a ton of passion and showing us a side of Massachusetts that not even myself knows too well. When people think of the state they either first go to all of the great colleges and schools in the Northeast, the state of sports, or about the history like the Boston Tea Party. Though in this essay, Hodgman hones in the western part of Massachusetts.

Like I said earlier, western Massachusetts is literally no man’s land – I couldn’t tell you more than three towns in the west. I just wracked my brains, and I came up lacking, so none, how’s that? I’ve always thought of it as a plot of land with trees all over and log cabins scattered all around. When Hodgman introduced the West he described “it was not near a town, and not near anything.” Adding to my point it shows just how empty and peaceful that part of the state can be. He also makes it sound a little lonely describing the long drives, silence, and the strange culture out there. It might just be me though, but when I drive out and about… I like to drive by myself in the quiet (not really quiet, music in the background of course), it’s just some time where I can think about the day or life in general with no one to hound me. But I’ve never seen “…cornfields and dairy farms and incongruous fields of shade tobacco for cigar wrappers”. Hodgeman calls it “Masstucky.” I believe that it could refer to the idea that some of Massachusetts isn’t really Massachusetts. It sort of reminds you of Kentucky where it’s less crowded and sort of the Wild West, nonetheless, the complete opposite of Eastern Mass. In contrast, the other side of Massachusetts is an absolute homewreck. If you have ever driven in Boston, you’d know how reckless people are in the car and on the roads. Every two seconds you see people jay walk across the road when the light turns green. Then all of a sudden you hear horns from every direction – your ears will be engulfed in car horns. 

If you’re not from Massachusetts I bet you’ve made at least one or two stereotypical jokes about Boston – how they’re either the smartest state with all the elite education we have over here or about how dumb we are, like how we traverse the roads and what horrible drivers we are, or even our accents. Well I can assure you that, that’s all semi true. If you’re ever traversing Boston, you’ll come across a man in some Boston sports attire in his car screaming at the top of his lungs to get off the road in his Bostonian accent. Though, on the other side of the spectrum there are the high tier educated folks that go to Harvard or MIT, I can assure you that I haven’t come across a single student who has been to either school. There’s a small population of people that go to those schools and that small population doesn’t define our state (I mean if you insist, I’ll happily take the compliment of our state being called the smartest one out of fifty).



LANA LUU

After reading The Rescuers by Margery Sharp, I watched the movie on Disney+, and it was enjoyable. But there are many differences, especially the plot and how Miss Bianca in the film is not how I thought she was portrayed in the book. She is elegant yet proud, perhaps a little spoiled especially at first, but she also has a true and kind heart. Miss Bianca in the film is much sweeter and cheerful. She still has the heart to help others, but the film shows her more as a sidekick to Bernard, the janitor mouse, more than as an elegant ambassador mouse who comes from such a lovely place, as she was shown in the book.

I liked both Biancas in the book and movie, but I missed some of the elegance about Miss Bianca in the book. The biggest difference was the plot. The plot in the book involved the rescue of a Norwegian poet from a prison and had more to do with the peril of sneaking into a place with humans and their guard dog. In the book, Miss Bianca and Bernard are on a mission to rescue a Norwegian poet from a prison. It’s a quiet and careful mission with sneaking, and thinking, and lots of danger. In the movie, they are trying to rescue a little girl named Penny from a villainess named Madame Medusa, who is forcing her to find a diamond in a dangerous cave. That made the movie feel more exciting and put more action in the movie.

Miss Bianca in the movie is sweet and brave, but she’s not as fancy as in the book. In the book, I pictured her as very proper and royal. In the movie, she’s kinder and more cheerful, and works well with Bernard. Bernard is also more nervous in the movie, which made him funny. I liked how their friendship grew stronger. I felt bad for Penny in the movie. One of my favorite parts was when Bernard and Bianca flew on the back of Orville the albatross: it was funny. Even though the plot changed a lot, the movie still was similar to the book The Rescuers. I enjoyed both the book and the movie, and I think that in the movie they added more characters for it to be more enjoyable.

I then watched the movie The Rescuers Down Under. At first it was interesting when Cody got pushed into the hole at the start because he could’ve been in a lot of trouble. Then when I heard the hunter showed up with a gun I got scared for Cody.

Then it got intense when the lizard came for Cody and then the hunter kidnapped him. Another part of the movie I was worried about was where all the animals were locked up in a room and when the lizard tried chasing one of the animals for the key.

In the movie I noticed Bernard and Bianca’s love has strengthened. First Bernard and Bianca are at a restaurant to eat, Bernard is nervous because he is thinking about proposing to Bianca. He somehow lost the ring and meanwhile they were told to go on a mission to save a kid named Cody. Then they go on the mission, they start getting closer with each other on the adventure and with each other a lot. Later on in the movie Bernard finally proposes to Miss Bianca after they save Cody, in the end she accepts. In The Rescuers, the villain Madame Medusa is equally evil to the hunter in The Rescuers Down Under.

The villain Madame Medusa captured a little girl named Penny so she could get the Devil Eye Diamond which is also a similar situation with the villain in The Rescuers Down Under. The Hunter comes across a little boy named Cody and kidnaps him so that he can track down Marahute (a rare bird). The difference between the two is that both of the villains want something from the child. In conclusion, The Rescuers Down Under is a very enjoyable movie. It was interesting and I think other people would enjoy this movie.



LEONA ZHOU

The ending of Book Four (The Two Towers) is abrupt and somewhat of a cliff-hanger. I think it’s kind of sad that Gollum didn’t have a better character development. I expected him to change into a better person because of Frodo’s kindness, but after all, he’s been wretched and wicked for quite a long time for a hobbit’s lifespan. When he agreed to help Frodo out and to never harm him, you would think he actually did it out of kindness when it was a trap all along. I feel like his evilness is partly because of his nature and partly because of having possession of the Ring for so long; he is not strong enough to resist and stay pure like Frodo – which is kind of pitiful.

Meanwhile, Sam’s character development is much better, as in the most life threatening moments he is willing to sacrifice his own life for Frodo. And almost all throughout the book he is always following Frodo’s choices, occasionally pitching in his own opinion, but never really making real decisions, as he isn’t really good at them. But in the last chapter, when he sees Frodo lying unconscious, he grits his teeth and takes on the burden of the Ring, which isn’t an easy task or an easy decision to make. “‘But what can I do? Not leave Mr. Frodo dead, unburied on the top of the mountains, and go home? Or go on? Go on?’ he repeated, and for a moment doubt and fear shook him. ‘Go on? Is that what I’ve got to do? And leave him?’” (Tolkien, page 714). This is a huge moment for Sam, as he has to step up and use the power he now has in his hands. It’s nice to see Sam showing courage to go on without his master, since he truly believed Frodo was dead and that he had to face the terrifying journey ahead alone. Speaking of which, when Tolkien wrote that Frodo was dead, I almost didn’t believe it, because he’s the main character, and there’s still The Return of the King before the series ends, so I thought there even if Frodo was dead for now, there’s going to be a way he would come back alive later. Nevertheless, I was still relieved when I found out that Frodo wasn’t actually dead, it was just the effect of Shelob’s poison. Yet I think this once again shows how skilled Tolkien is in plotting his tales, because this was a perfect chance to let Sam grow.